If you Give me a Chance - 1D/Cimorelli fanfic (Eng)
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chokladgrodan:D
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Opps,sorry.
Jag läser alltid såklart, men lämnar inte alltid kommenterar som du kanske märktXD Men jag har tyckt att alla kapitel hittils har varit SUPERBRA. Jag tycker att det är roligt att även om du skriver på engelska är det väldigt lätt att förstå.Det känns liksom...lätt och, luftigt på nått sätt.Jag vet inte riktigt hur jag ska uttryka mig...Men väldigt bra är det jallafall  *blink* Heeej...Jag antar att jag borde skriva nått här men tyvärr äger jag ingen fantasi. Så att'e... 31 dec, 2013 10:47 |
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Mixy
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chokladgrodan:D Tack så hemskt mycket!
Jag blir jätteglad, och det är inte för att jag vill ha uppmärksamhet/komplimanger som jag skrev det där. Jag vill bara veta vad ni gillar och vad jag borde tänka på för att kunna skriva så bra som möjligt! Gott nytt år allihopa! Har ni några nyårs-löften? -Stella♥♥♥ "Bokhandlare by day, misslyckad författare by night" 31 dec, 2013 15:46 |
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chokladgrodan:D
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*blink* Heeej...Jag antar att jag borde skriva nått här men tyvärr äger jag ingen fantasi. Så att'e... 31 dec, 2013 15:53 |
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Mixy
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Chapter 11 Part 2:
Soon we are in the dressing rooms. Of course, we girls and the boys got separate rooms. “Hey Amy, can I borrow your eyeliner?” Lauren asks me. I’m sitting in the couch and keep drifting away, thinking. “Hello? Ames?” “Wait, what?” “Your eyeliner?” Lauren asks. “Yeah, of course”, I answer and hands her my eyeliner. “Girls”, Paul knocks on our door. “You are on in ten minutes”. “Okay, thanks”, Christina yells out to him and turns to us. “Okay girls, are you ready?” We all nod and walk out of the dressing room. When we are backstage getting ready the boys come running to us, probably from their dressing room. Lisa and Dani stop dancing on the spot and try to hold themselves fro laughing at the boys. “Hey guys”, Lauren says, surprised. “They wouldn’t let us wish you guys good luck, so we ran away from them”, Louis says between his deep breaths. He looks like a little child who just did a prank on the grownups. “Wow, no way”, Dani says, pretending to be awed. “I told you they wouldn’t be impressed”, Zayn mutter to Louis. Louis just shrugs. A woman with a black headset on walks up to us. She looks very important and stuff. “Cimorelli, you are on now”, she says and then walks away. No time to be polite in her world. Harry pulls Lisa in to a big hug and kisses her forehead. Christina starts to walk up the stairs to the scene and Katherine follows. Lisa pulls away from Harry and walks up too. Then it’s my turn. I look at Niall, and he quickly walks up to me. ”Good luck”, He says, smiling at me. “Thank you”, I answer, and the weird tension between us is so thick that you can cut it with a knife. The others pretend to talk with each other, and I’m kind of thankful for that. It’s awkward even if they don’t listen. “I’m so sorry. I just want you to know that”, Niall says, looking deep into my eyes. It’s the first time I can see his eyes close-up. They are blue like water, and they are full of sorrow. Often I see them hidden behind a hard wall, but now, for a second, I catch a glimpse of his real colour. I feel my knees getting weaker every second I meet his gaze, so I quickly turn away and walk up to the stage. “Hello everybody!” I say in my microphone when I walk up to Christina, Katherine and Lisa. Lauren and Dani quickly go up to us and we stand on the stage, looking out at the fans. Christina takes her microphone up to her mouth. “We are so happy to be here today!” She says and the public screams. I only see the first few rows of the fans, but that’s enough to make my heart beat like crazy. I see a little girl, maybe 6 years old, holding a sign that said “I ♥ CIMORELLI”. I wave at her a little, and you see how her eyes widen and how she turns to her mother. “The first song we are going to sing for you guys was our first original song together!” Lisa continues. “This is Million Bucks”. Hej främlingar!!! Okej, seriöst, det känns som om jag inte har varigt inne sen typ... FÖRRA ÅRET!!! ba dum tsss.... Cuz U know, I'm cool like that. Like, yeah. FRÅGA: Vilket ship gillar ni mest? Namy (Niall & Amy) Hisa (Harry & Lisa) ELLER.... Zatherine (Zayn & Katherine) Jag såg en interjuv med Cimorelli, där dom berättade sina favoriter i 1D... Det gick typ såhär: Interviewer: One Direction, who is your favorite in One Direction? Dani: Harry Katherine: eh, Niall? I guess? Lisa: Zayn...? Christina: No preference (she got a bf you know) Lauren: Yeah, I don't really have a favorite Amy: Yeah, um... Probably Niall if I have to pick... Okej... Så bara Amy är snäll nog att välja mitt favvo-ship... HELL YEAH ok jag ska gå nu BYEEEE --Stella♥ "Bokhandlare by day, misslyckad författare by night" 8 jan, 2014 10:40 |
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Freddelito
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Oh my godness dear its amazing!!! Namy is awsome, just because their history has been quite hard ♥ But Zatherin does also sound wonderful, want to know more about them ^^ keep going girl ;*
8 jan, 2014 19:29 |
Borttagen
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I have to say I love Hisa ♥ soooooo cute!
8 jan, 2014 22:27 |
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Mixy
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Ni får ursäkta, det här är inte världens bästa kapitel haha
Chapter 12 Niall’s p.o.v… After the show, we take our bags and go on the tour bus again. We are going to the airport to take a night flight. “Why can’t we stay at the hotel tonight and go tomorrow?” Dani complains. “We’ll have a whole day in Paris tomorrow before the show”, Katherine point out, and Dani’s eyes widen. “We are going to France?” Louis laughs at her. “Yeah, we are”. Lisa lays her arms around Harry. “The city of love”, she whispers into his chest. He smiles and kisses her forehead. I give Amy a quick glance, and I swear a see her turn her head away when she sees that I look at her. Lauren and Dani are laughing, rather hysterical, at something Lauren said, and Lisa tries to imitate them. It turns out that Lisa is very good at doing the worm, and don’t ask how it went from imitating Lauren and Dani to doing the worm, because I really have no idea. We go on the flight, and most of us fall asleep. I do too, and after what seems like a few minutes, we are landing in Paris. Quickly we go to the tour bus, and as we see the sun rise we are heading to the hotel. Its a few hours until we are there though, so everybody do their own thing. Either they watch a movie on Louis’ laptop or they just sit and talk. Katherine is sipping on a mug with tea, and she looks thoughtful, like she’s thinking of something that’s confusing. Zayn sits besides her, and he whispers something in her ear. Katherine shakes her head, and from what I see, she goes a bit pale. Christina is sitting and writing in a note-book. Her face is filled with concentration. After a while she grins, and when Liam asks her what’s up she explains. “I write my songs in this book, and sometimes it just feels right. Do you understand? Like you know that many people are going to love it”. I see Katherine’s face become even paler, and Zayn whispers something again. “Christina?” Katherine start to say, and her face goes from white to red in a matter of seconds. “I just thought… but maybe it’s a bad idea… yeah, it’s a really bad idea. But maybe… sometime, maybe we can have… a few of my lyrics in one of the songs?” Christina looks up, surprised at Katherine. “Oh, Kath, but you don’t write songs”, She says simply, looking down at her phone again and keep scrolling though pictures. “Well, I kind of do”, Katherine explains, but I can see that she lost a lot of her confidence. “I though you said that you don’t want to write songs, that’s why I do it”, Christina continues, a little frustrated. Lauren pause the movie and everyone looks at Katherine and Christina. Katherine stands up. “Well, I’ve written poems since I was little, so I think I know how to write lyrics”. “Oh, you mean your poems?” Christina asks. “But those are poems Kath, not song lyrics!” “I’ve read her poems”, Zayn says out of nowhere. “They are amazing, it would make incredible songs”. Katherine shakes her head, and you can clearly see the tears in her eyes. “Its okay Zayn, Christina writes the songs, not me”. Then she takes her earplugs and phone and walks up to the girl’s floor. Christina sits there; quiet, with a chocked look on her face. dum dum dum.... --Stella♥ "Bokhandlare by day, misslyckad författare by night" 12 jan, 2014 09:22 |
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Lida
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AWESOM kapitel ♥♥
 
Läs Järna min ff Mån barnet http://www.mugglarportalen.se/#forum.php?topic=35314&page=5#p2336622
12 jan, 2014 09:29 |
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Freddelito
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12 jan, 2014 09:43 |
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Ariana Potter
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Amazing girl! Förlåt för att jag inte kommenterat på aslänge, men jag hade kommit emot " sluta bevaka" knappen och jag har undrat när det kommer kapitel här, och sen upptäcker att jag inte bevakar! Men nu har jag läst ikapp och bevakar igen ♥ fortsätt såhär, du är grym!
 
12 jan, 2014 10:49 |
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