If you Give me a Chance - 1D/Cimorelli fanfic (Eng)
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Ledsen för att det tog så lång tid
 Chapter 9 part 1 Niall’s p.o.v… Lauren gives me a thumb up before returning to her room, and I think of what she mean. That I should go for it? That I did great? I have no idea. But I don’t have any time to think about it, because It takes a while to calm Amy down. “I can’t believe them! This is the problem with having ten siblings, you can never, and I mean NEVER, have a private life!” I lay my hand on her shoulder and look her in her eyes. She stops talking, and she looks like she is fighting with herself inside. “Take it easy tiger”, I say jokingly, and smile at her. “Do you want to go and grab some breakfast? You know, as friends”, I quickly add. She nod, looking relived, and we walk out of the hotel. Amy’s p.o.v… Soon we are at Starbucks. There are many people there, so we decide that we should take our coffee to the park. We sit down in the grass and talk and laugh. I am getting the same feeling as when we were talking on the plane and I guess it help that my siblings aren’t here. I get to know Niall, the Irish boy who loves to sing. He tell me that he have a brother, Greg, a mom, Maura, and his dad Bobby. “I’ve played guitar since I was little, and I still love it”, he says and smiles. I smile at him. “I play the guitar too, you know”. He turns around to look at me, but he doesn’t look surprised. “I knew that, you played guitar in Heart Attack”. I nod quietly. “And in Rolling In the Deep. And I knew you were Trouble and Payphone”. I add, laughing. Niall laughs too. I smile teasingly at him. “Okay, how many girlfriends have you had?” He laughs at me and berries his face in his hands. “Well…” he says after a while. “I’ve only had two real girlfriends before.” “Why did you break up with them?” I ask. “I didn’t” He says, looking at me seriously. I roll my eyes and he brush out laughing again. Then we sit in silence, looking out at the park. “Well”, Niall said, looking at his watch. “We’ve been here for a very long time. We have a concert tonight, so we better go back.” I agree and stand up. I hold out my hand for him and he takes it. I drag him up and we start to walk back to the hotel. --Stella♥ "Bokhandlare by day, misslyckad författare by night" 21 dec, 2013 16:48 |
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AWESOME kapitel och jättebra skrivet ♥♥
 
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21 dec, 2013 16:58 |
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Really cute ♥
21 dec, 2013 17:18 |
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GOD JUL
Min julklapp till er är ett EXTRA LÅNGT kapitel! Chapter 9 part 2 Lisa’s p.o.v… Christina looks at the watch again. “We’re she?” She asks herself, quite angry. Amy is nowhere to be found, and so is Niall. Christina is really mad, but most worried, even though we are almost sure that Amy is with Niall. “She’ll be here soon”, Liam says, rubbing her back comforting. Christina sights and sits down next to him. Just then Amy and Niall come in to the room. Christina jumps up and hugs Amy, tight. “Oh my god, I’m so sorry! We forgot the time!” She says to us. Harry walks up to Niall and whispers something to him. Niall shake his head and whispers something back. When Harry walks up to me again I ask him what it was about. “Oh, nothing babe, don’t worry about that”. Then he kisses me on the cheek, take my hand and go to rehearsals with the others. The guys do some of their songs while we warm up. When they are done Harry whispers “good luck” when we go up on the stage. First we do Made in America, then Million Bucks, The Way We Live and Wings. It is so fun, even though we don’t have any people watching us. Oh wait, scratch that, the boys watch. Just to mess with us or to make us laugh they sit in the front row and acts like the fans. They scream, squeal, fangirl and I think that Louis passes out. When we are done they clap their hands and tell us what they think. “Your harmonies are amazing”, Louis states when we get of the stage. “Your voices are incredible, they sound so good together!” Liam says. Harry just walks up to me and kisses me. It is a very passionate kiss, maybe the most passionate yet, and I can feel him smile against my lips. Zayn pokes him on the shoulder, but he ignores him. We only break the kiss when we need air. “Wow” I whisper. Hi smirk at me. “Yeah, wow”, He agrees. We look around and realise that the others are gone. The lights are off too, like the room is closed or something. “I guess they were jealous” Harry says, smiles and leans in again. Chapter 10 Niall’s p.o.v… When Harry and Lisa stood there and made out we all walked out, to give them a little alone-time. “Okay, what should we do now?” Zayn asks us. There are a few hours until the show starts, so we can do whatever we want really. “We could just watch a movie” Dani suggest. We all agree, because we are all really tired. We go in to the biggest hotel-room, Lisa’s and Amy’s, and look though the movies we have. “The Notebook!” Katherine yells suddenly. Zayn looks at her, surprised. “Do you like The Notebook Kath?” He asks her. She nod and he smile at her. “Me too, I love it!” We end up watching The Notebook. The room only has two beds and one sofa, so we all sit very close to each other. I don’t really mind, because I sit beside Amy. Halfway though the movie she lays her head on my shoulder and I feel goose bumps on my arms. “Are you cold Niall?” Amy asks me. I nod and she gets a blanket that she covers us with. I smile at her. “Thank you Ames”. Just then the door open and Lisa and Harry walk in. They sit down next to me and Amy. Harry has his arm over Lisa’s shoulders and I feel myself getting jealous. Not because I fancy Lisa or anything, but because I want to be able to do that with Amy! Snuggling while watching movies, kiss when others see it, holding hands… “Niall? Niall!” I wake up from my daydream of being in a relationship with Amy and look around in the room. Everybody is staring at me, and the end-credits are rolling in the film. “What happened?” I ask, quite confused. Harry looks at me with sad eyes. “Well… you fell asleep… and you talked in your sleep…” Oh crap. “What did I say?” I ask them, and my mouth goes very dry. Amy is sitting a few feet away from me, looking down at her hands, while Lauren is rubbing her back. I’m just about to tell them that I don’t really want to know what I said when Liam opens his mouth. “Well…” Hi begins. “You said Amy’s name, many times”. I feel my cheeks become red and I rise from my seat. “I’m so sorry Amy… I really didn’t mean to…” Katherine cuts me of. “Maybe, it’s time for you guys to leave”. I nod and walk out of the room. When I’ve come out to the corridor I sight. And then I punch the wall as hard as a can, just to let the anger out. “Easy there tiger.” Louis says as he comes out after me. The other boys are right behind him, and they all look at me with concerned faces. “Shut up Lou”, I mutter, but he ignores me. We walk into Louis’, Liam’s and Zayn’s room. I sit down at one of the beds and put my face in my hands. “I’ve ruined everything”, I whisper. “Okay, Niall, you have to tell us what is happening” Liam says when he closes the door behind him. “You all know already”, I say irritated. “We don’t, Harry do”, Louis say, pointing at Harry. Harry take up him hands in defence. “I don’t know anything more than you guys!” He says. Zayn sit down next to me on the bed. “Niall, please, tell us what happened?” And I tell them. I tell them how I felt when I saw Amy the first time, how she smelled when I hugged her, how I understood how I felt about her and asked her out, how she got mad at me and then asked to be friends. And at last, how I dreamed about her; and now she hates me for taking it to fast. When I’m done, the boys are quiet for a moment. “Okay, you can say it now. I’m a big jerk”, I say after a while. Harry meets my gaze and shakes his head. “You can still do it, just remember not to push her into anything. Don’t go too fast”. Liam looks at Harry with a confused face. “Says the guy who made out with the girl he likes not even ten minutes after they met!” Harry ignores him and keeps his eyes on mine. “Take a step back, and let her think for a few days. It’ll be good for you both”. God Jul, jag älskar er, hoppas ni får en underbar dag! --Stella♥♥♥ "Bokhandlare by day, misslyckad författare by night" 24 dec, 2013 08:58 |
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AWESOME kapitel ♥♥ poor Naill
Och ha en God Jul
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24 dec, 2013 09:08 |
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U're amazing, just give me more girl
24 dec, 2013 13:46 |
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Mixy
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Ledsen för att ni har fått vänta!
Chapter 11 part 1 Katherine’s p.o.v… I walk into my room to choose what I’m going to wear tonight at the concert. It’s like an hour left so I have lots of time. But when I get into the room, I get a little chock. Zayn is sitting on my bed, reading a book. When I come in he looks up and smiles, like it’s not totally creepy that he’s in my room, sitting on my bed, reading a book. “Hi there”, He says and continue reading. Just then I realise what book he’s reading. My book of poems! “Um… That is pretty private”. I say and take the book from him. He sits up in the bed and pats the spot beside him. I sit down, slowly. “You are really talented”, He says and smiles. I feel my face burn red. “Thank you”, I mumble to him, and he chuckles “Do you write the songs you guys are performing?” He asks, meeting my eyes. I shake my head. “No… It’s Christina’s job to do the lyrics”. Zayn looks surprised, and he furrows his eyebrows. “Why can’t you? You are so talented Kath; these poems can make great songs!” “Well, I don’t want to argue about it…” I say, looking down at my hands. He lays his arm around my shoulders and looks at me. “You are awesome, you know that right?” I grin at him and he grins back. “I guess”, I answer him after a while. Amy’s p.o.v… I still feel a little weird after what happened when we were watching the movie. At first, it was great. Niall sat next to me and it felt totally okay. But then, when it was just a few minutes left of the movie, he started to talk in his sleep. I remember him falling asleep on my shoulder, and the teasing look Christina gave me, but it felt good, actually. It was really awkward when he woke up though, but soon he and the boys walked out. The girls asked me what was going on and I told them as much as a could. I open the door to my and Lisa’s room and walk in. Lisa is in the bathroom getting ready for tonight. I look though my clothes to see what I have to pick from. After a minute I choose the red dress I had in the Counting Starts video. Just then Lisa comes out from the bathroom. Her hair is wet and I see steam coming from the door. “I have no idea what I’m going to wear!” she exclaims. I laugh and help her pick out an outfit. Then we hear I knock on the door. I open and see Liam and Harry standing there. They smile when they see me. “Looking good, Amy”, Liam says and I laugh. “Thanks”. Harry peeks into our room and whistles when he sees Lisa. “You look great babe”, He says and kiss her on the cheek. She grins and takes his hand. I haven’t seen Lisa this happy in a long time! I really hope Harry treats her right. Not that I doubt it, but still. “Well, we came to tell you guys that we need to go”. I nod and walk out after Liam. Soon we are sitting in the limo. “So, are you guys nervous?” Louis asks, smiling a little teasingly at us. “Well, yeah!” Dani exclaims. “Aren’t you?” “Of course we are”, Zayn says, shrugging. “But if you’ve done a few hundreds shows before you know that it’s nothing to be nervous for.” Det kommer att bli bättre snart, jag lovar! Och ja, jag vet att Katherine var den som skrev texten till Million Bucks, och att det inte är bara Christina som gör låtarna, men det måste vara lite annorlunda för att historien ska gå ihop! --Stella♥ "Bokhandlare by day, misslyckad författare by night" 29 dec, 2013 14:20 |
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I LOVE IT ♥♥
Awesome skrivet 
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29 dec, 2013 15:20 |
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Lida Tusen tack!!!
Och by the way allihopa, jag skulle bli jätte-tacksam om ni tipsade andra om den här fanficen, eller började kommentera mer! Jag får bara ett par kommentarer efter varje kapitel, och jag skulle bli jätteglad om ni berättade vad ni gillade/inte gillade och sa varför! Tack så mycket!♥ --Stella♥♥♥ "Bokhandlare by day, misslyckad författare by night" 29 dec, 2013 22:52 |
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I'm sorry that I haven't been on for a while :'(
But now I'm back ♥ And as always, I looooove u'r writing and all, AmaZAYN :p 30 dec, 2013 21:26 |
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