The real world [ENG]

Hejsan! Jag har nyss skrivit en novell på svenska och översatt den till Engelska. Det är typ en liten Fanfiction av The Woman in black.

It was the middle of the day, just after noon. Hawley, Jasmine and Jacqueline sat in their room. For some reason, strangely serene. Hawley stood on tiptoe and took out his beautiful tea service. Jasmine took her favorite doll, Lily and Jacqueline was in her doll. They could hear noises from the kitchen on the ground floor which meant that Miss Adams was doing the evening meal that would be a big feast to celebrate their mother Andromeda. Hawley lifted a beautiful silk dress with a floral pattern and took it over the head of her doll. Hawley poured the water into the cups. It took exactly three seconds before the other two girls lifted respective cup and kept them in the mouths of their dolls. Hawley smiled and lifted her porcelain shame and began to comb the long blond hair of her doll.

After they had continued their game, with their perfect dolls and their perfect place spread a silence in the room. Hawley had just supposed to offer Jasmine doll Lily more tea felt his tongue did not obey her thoughts. Jacqueline immediately noticed that something was wrong. They could still hear the piano and Miss Adams downstairs in the kitchen. Footsteps on the stairs down to the hall and the grandfather clock, but the room was quiet. It was almost going to be drowned in silence.

It felt like something that has not appeared, like a ghost or a spirit disappeared into Hawley. She could see that her sisters' eyes went out, not that they were closed without irises and pupils disappeared into the mind of them and just the sclera was left. Hawley stood up, but to determine it myself, it was more like it there, who was now in her told her to obey and forced her. Hawley dropped the cup which she had kept in on the floor and heard fastidious when it hit the floor. She turned to the window that overlooked the courtyard outside and began spellbound go against it. Jasmine heel of one of her boot smashed the teapot and Jacqueline's heels on her boots one ripped the head of Lily. The steps seemed to echo in the room. Hawley came to the window and opened it, she climbed up on the window sill and Jasmine and Jacqueline too. The three girls took a last common wheezing breath. They jumped and felt the wind against your face.

In their place was a ghost, a woman with sunken cheeks. She was not breathing and just looked at the window, the three girls had been her victims. The woman could hear a scream.
"My girls! My girls!"

Good!

Har ingen anning om vad women in black är XD. Men den var jättebra ! Och läskig 0.0

Thanks! Missy The Timelady och 1233679 det behövs inte, huvudsaken är att man förstår

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